Foundation Portfolio: Idea summary/story line

The opening will be set in a forest with two young girls camping out in a tent in the evening. There will be several establishing shots setting up the location and characters. Then in the distance the camera will show a mysterious figure approaching. This character will be holding some form of weapon (hammer or axe probably), and there will be a series of shots that will build suspense as he approaches the tent from different angles. Diegetic sound will be a big element of this, the girls will hear it and start to get scared. The climax will be when he gets to them and there will be an extreme wide shot as they scream at the end.